Zak G"s I know why the caged bird sings posting 6 chapters 24-27

I am so happy that the book is actually finally getting interesting.  Maya is no longer apparently depressed, and they (Maya and Bailey) have made it to San Francisco with their mom and new husband.  I think I found the rest of the book uninteresting because it was sett in the country side, where as I like the big cities and the people, maybe not as much as Maya with her very wordy explanations of why she likes it.  Still, I feel as if this book can be saved and I am eager to see what awaits Maya and her Brother.  One thing I would like to point out though, is, do you notice how random the way the book was written.  I can't quite point it out but it seems like the author jumps around quite a bit and sometimes I have a hard time following it, but it may be just me, let me know if you notice it too though.  Also I would like to know what your ideas are on this point in the book.  How do you like it?  What are some interesting things you have noticed that I have neglected to mention?  I am just curious.  I also would like to say that their mom is a much more lively character than any other in this book, and it is interesting to read the way that Maya describes her, and the way she can respect her even more for shooting a man, although she does have a good point that that man was warned before hand.